2009年5月24日星期日

Florence

Your Way Home
by Iris

tilted head,
wide-opened narrow eyes,
zero zero forty-nine

dawdle over
black and white,
lazy bones, paralyzed

two hazy O’s,
as salt water dribbles

wheels running
before rain,
I hope.

mirrored on ebony,
double vision yellow,
dial not, look not,
she is to be

left alone.

zero zero fifty-nine,
one.
home?

4 則留言:

  1. "Wide-opened narrow eyes" is unbelievably beautiful. I also like "mirrored on ebony, double vision yellow", it depicts the tears in the eyes really well.

    Nice! Can you write me one with music? lol

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  2. 超感動的呢!雖然有待你詳細的解釋…【爆笑ing】

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  3. it would feel really strange to explain my own poem to you, especially on such a serious issue.

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