Your Way Home
by Iris
tilted head,
wide-opened narrow eyes,
zero zero forty-nine
dawdle over
black and white,
lazy bones, paralyzed
two hazy O’s,
as salt water dribbles
wheels running
before rain,
I hope.
mirrored on ebony,
double vision yellow,
dial not, look not,
she is to be
left alone.
zero zero fifty-nine,
one.
home?
Oh my, that's sweet.
回覆刪除"Wide-opened narrow eyes" is unbelievably beautiful. I also like "mirrored on ebony, double vision yellow", it depicts the tears in the eyes really well.
回覆刪除Nice! Can you write me one with music? lol
超感動的呢!雖然有待你詳細的解釋…【爆笑ing】
回覆刪除it would feel really strange to explain my own poem to you, especially on such a serious issue.
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